Sunday, October 11, 2009

The first love of my life!

Like I always do,
I was leaving again,
Like never before,
She was crying in pain!

Had no choice
but to depart,
and leave away
the weeping heart!

The tears in the heart,
ail in the core,
bratty from the face,
inside gored!

Forging the face,
choking in the heart,
feeling dissipated,
I could say no word!

Holding my breath,
looking in her eyes,
I gave her a hug,
and more she cried!

With least desire,
I had to leave,
lots of pain
and lots of grief!

Alas, I could stay,
to make her smile,
but you aren’t that lucky
always in your life!

The words I missed,
I never said to you,
I bear in my core,
the color of you!

The birth and the bliss,
I opened my eyes,
I fell in love,
with a beautiful surprise!

No timidity,
no strife,
you’re the first love,
of my life!

Every breath, every moment,
today and forever,
I’ll love you evermore,
oh my dear Mother!!!



dev said...

Hi Shashank,

Well done.You must have made your mom proud.

Well with my thoughts counting upon i feel the poem very nostalgic though emotional.Its good to remember your first love as obsolete but its better to remember as charismatic.

I recommend do not make your love lost but make it happen and lively.

So post a poem describing your love rather then remembering her pain.
Make your mom your idol.

Thats a honest reply.

Will wait for your next post.

usha said...

Its really awesome...
Good one Shashank!!!!

usha said...

Its awesome... good one Shashank!!!!

Shashank Shekhar said...

Sure Dev. Thank you for your comments. :)

Thank you Usha :)

snehal said...

a very touching poem..... incredible!!!

notforsale said...

that was beautiful...i now understand the realtions my mum and brother share is not one of a kind :) all you sons!!!

Dolly(Prachi)!!! said...

God shashank aap bahut shi likhte .. boss maan gye aapko.. superb creativity u hv shown in this poem of urs.. grt man .... kash hum bhi itna accha soch pate likh paate :)All the best

Shruti said...

Can I comment on shashank's literary works! It's just awesome as ever!
Am thrilled to see the way u think!!
Very nice write up!

Rashmi said...

Good job!!

Keep up the good work!!

Marcia M said...

Very nice. The ending is a never expected that ending. Beautiful!

Mou said...

this is beautiful... it left me wanting to go back to my mother.

but you know what i would like to see the same love the other way round... the livelier way !
i actually agree with dev.

But wen i look at it this way, i wonder if could have been this warm if it were the other way round.

I had already been missing my mom, and this acted a catalyst. :(

Shashank Shekhar said...

hmmm... no intentions to make you feel that way!!